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28-06-2007, 20:55
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 is my poem even acceptable ? i sent my poem to poetry.com but they refused to publish it .. right now i'm so upset .. donno what to do .. May be it was a wrong idea to write an English poem ? ( As i'm an Arabian guy ) .. May be i'm not that good in English ? .. donno .. can you just please rate my poem and tell me how to edit it to make it even acceptable ?BrotherI can feel your blood Flowing in my heart,I can hear your breathMoving in my lungs,I can see your tearsRunning down my face,My life without youIs an empty place,Because your land is my land,Because your blood is my blood,And your soul is my soul,Cause we all are one hand,When you cryI feel your pain,When you are woundedI bleed again,When you feel happyI fly high,When you succeed I can touch the sky.
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28-06-2007, 21:26
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| Thats amazing you made that by yourself???Wow a self born artist they must be stupid to not except something like that.Try a new publishing company and see if there more intelligent to notice this great peice of work.
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28-06-2007, 21:35
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| Don't feel bad. They wanted to publish my poem which was crap. Find some other place for your poem. Poetry.com is a rip off. You can do better than that.P.S. Your poem is great. Keep it the way it is.
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29-06-2007, 07:38
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| I can see why you should feel hurt at not being considered publishable. I write poetry too and I know how disheartening it can get when a poem you have infused so much thought and imagination on shouldn't get it's deserved place.It's a lovely work this!
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29-06-2007, 07:45
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| WOW! It is GREAT...I love when guys write poetryumm im going to redo some of it how i would (feel free to take w/e you want from this) but dont feel forced to! its nice the way it is I starred* the changed partsBrotherI can feel your blood Rushing* through* my heart,I can hear your breathMoving in my lungs,I can see your tearsStreaking* down my face,My life without youIs an empty place,Because your land is my land,Because your blood is my blood,And your soul is my soul,Cause we all are one hand,When you cryI'm crushed* by(with)* your pain,When you are woundedI bleed again,When you are* happy (overuse of feel)I fly high,When you succeed I can touch the sky.
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29-06-2007, 07:55
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| the rejected tons of my sisters poems too. she has been writing poems since 3rd grade and well she committed suicide a few weeks ago but we have tried to get them published. poetry.com is very picky about their poems it really ****s bcuz she was such a great writer.try the web poemsrus.comit took a few of hers, the other day. Good Luck! btw, i liked ur poem.
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