do u like my poem?

tattybow · #1 01-07-2007, 13:25

A little call,A special crawl.Suddenly from no where you stand up,But start to drool.Your little feet start running,Your nose is dripping to.But then that little smile reminds me how much I love you!i havnt got a child! t was 4 my lil cousin! im 14

TAFF · #2 01-07-2007, 13:56

OMG sounds like me after a drink or 10! Lol Seriously it's sweet :-)

The Pro · #3 01-07-2007, 14:15

i like it so much that i can't stop thinking about it for 3 days.(especially the last line)

shortpeg2001 · #4 01-07-2007, 14:56

Very nice!

Skran · #5 01-07-2007, 15:05

It's nice.

radhakum1958 · #6 01-07-2007, 15:35

It is a cute poem describing ,no doubt, the antics of a cute little baby.It takes everybody to that cute baby-stage which all would adore to be-in-being fed whenever you are hungry,being taken care of without you asking,being loved and cuddled and having your whole world at your feet!

nayan · #7 01-07-2007, 15:45

its great.n as cute as ur cousin.(*well,i can visualise him)

Iain Speed · #8 01-07-2007, 16:45

you mispelt "too".Your nose is dripping too.You should keep on writing. If you've posted it up then you must enjoy it.

shastweety · #9 01-07-2007, 17:05

aw, sweet.

zeline c · #10 01-07-2007, 17:26

that poem is so sweet!

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