Is this a deep poem, does it make you feel anything?
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S What can you say about this poem, is it disturbing?
who am i?
nothing but a strange feeling
nothing but the sea
unescapable
who am i when i no longer believe
in what the world says
who am i when there is neither good or bad
when the hunger i no longer want to end
who am i just an endless hollow
where did my emotions go
staring at the window
floating in this murdered reality
who am i when i lost all the reasons
to continue, to dream, to reach out
who am i
when i no longer see
who am i when i dont believe in the truth
who is this person staring at me
looking deep within my swollen eyes
am i still here when death failed to scare me
when every rose that falls in the casket
brings sweet mystery, a longing in me
who am i when i could no longer love
am i still here?
who am i when nothing matters
even the rock could celebrate the grass
even the walls shout the vandals on its surface
even the pen finds glory within
but for me..me, who am i?
when my thought already chose to imprison itself.

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