life IS a journey, but if you believe it to be long and dull, you just need to meet a girl who will make you stop in your tracks, not because they've got an amazing body, but because when you look into her eyes..... you don't know how to explain what you see and what you feel, and all you know is that you love the woman looking right back into your eyes..... I found that girl when I was a HS freshman, and simply being with her has become my reason to keep going, and enjoy this long journey, we call life!

I hope you noticed I used the story like a journey as well. It is a run-on sentence, only commas and ellipses; the only ending punctuation I used was at the end of story itself. We may stall out sometimes, but it is within those times, that we must readjust our dreams. We don't necessarily need to change them, rather renew them to fit where we are in our journey.

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