WOW! It is GREAT...I love when guys write poetryumm im going to redo some of it how i would (feel free to take w/e you want from this) but dont feel forced to! its nice the way it is I starred* the changed partsBrotherI can feel your blood Rushing* through* my heart,I can hear your breathMoving in my lungs,I can see your tearsStreaking* down my face,My life without youIs an empty place,Because your land is my land,Because your blood is my blood,And your soul is my soul,Cause we all are one hand,When you cryI'm crushed* by(with)* your pain,When you are woundedI bleed again,When you are* happy (overuse of feel)I fly high,When you succeed I can touch the sky.

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