i sent my poem to poetry.com but they refused to publish it .. right now i'm so upset .. donno what to do .. May be it was a wrong idea to write an English poem ? ( As i'm an Arabian guy ) .. May be i'm not that good in English ? .. donno .. can you just please rate my poem and tell me how to edit it to make it even acceptable ?BrotherI can feel your blood Flowing in my heart,I can hear your breathMoving in my lungs,I can see your tearsRunning down my face,My life without youIs an empty place,Because your land is my land,Because your blood is my blood,And your soul is my soul,Cause we all are one hand,When you cryI feel your pain,When you are woundedI bleed again,When you feel happyI fly high,When you succeed I can touch the sky.

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